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Hello Mary,

Tom and I went to Paris last weekend and I wanted to tell you about it. Our hotel was great, so on our first night we ate there. The next day we decided to visit the Eiffel Tower, of course. There were lots of people, but the view was amazing. Then we went shopping, and I bought a very expensive jacket! On Sunday, we had breakfast at the hotel, and then we visited Notre Dame. Everything was wonderful.

Please write back soon,

Claire